Approximately 12 paragraphs into this article Randy McDaniels is quoted as saying "I'm very encouraged". Something very encouraging is that he is identified as the leader of the Jacksonville chapter of the "anti-radical Muslim" group ACT!for America. This is encouraging because we're usually identified as anti-Muslim, which makes us appear to be a hate-group. "Anti-radical Muslim" is a more appropriate description and shows progress in the author's, and hopefully the reader's understanding, of ACT!'s purpose.
Approximately 12 paragraphs into this article Randy McDaniels is quoted as saying "I'm very encouraged". Something very encouraging is that he is identified as the leader of the Jacksonville chapter of the "anti-radical Muslim" group ACT!for America. This is encouraging because we're usually identified as anti-Muslim, which makes us appear to be a hate-group. "Anti-radical Muslim" is a more appropriate description and shows progress in the author's, and hopefully the reader's understanding, of ACT!'s purpose.
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